DESTINED....

HAPPINESS .... the feeling of being happy ... is the only vicious point of every human's life.

Tuesday, October 25, 2005

i love YOU too ...

Questions for all are not mined out,
Reasons for each are not carved out;
Deep and dark the mines can be,
Impossible its to answer those may be .....


Aspects of life many give me pleasure,
Pain given by
others dont count treasure;
Happiness is all I want in this life,
Selfish for it can how I be it is rife.....


Know not the way of love expression,
Makes me full of futile frustrations;
Think
you everyday,everytime & in my dreams,
Unable to define though writing reams & reams....


Wish I could say
love you very much,
But dont know the way I love you as such;
Beautiful is the way as I see this,
Deepened through time its just an abyss....


Not you are life's trunk
my better-half,
Cause I am just a sail, she is the gaff;
More than a life partner you mean to me,
You are
not the honey & I am not the bee.....


Words always the dictionary can define,
Cant express emotions however you align;
Know nobody can help in expressing emotions,
Never can be defined this absurd
relation.....


Absurd may be this link mean to you,
I am still happy as it means something to you;
Rusted, old and weak this chain may be,
But nobody can break it
except you and me....


I am just a grain and you are a twinkling star,
Trials are futile, you will be always at far;
Nothing I have which you appreciate or like,
Even if I show will be invisible in your light.....


Knowing this as well you show me some care,
As you are clad of jewels & I am still bare;
You, neither do I expect nor do I stare,
Telling these to you still never do I dare......


Watching you, spying you I am there always,
Invisible I become when looks me your eyes;
"Is it me?" for a moment you may wonder,
"Yeah its you." there is nothing to ponder.....


I am not sad for being helpless,
Neither I get pain nor any stress;
Wanted the all I want to confess,
Love for you will never become less......


If
still wondering I cant help you,
Realize why you cant
its only you;
Looks by writting is never my attempt,
Hope
"You will believe", therefore did I tempt......


Know not what this feeling is though,
Enjoying it always makes me bow;
My beloved is there always ready to woo,
Apart from her
I LOVE YOU TOO ......

6 Comments:

At 1:21 AM, October 25, 2005, Anonymous Anonymous said...

no work and only blog makes u an azzhole

 
At 7:33 PM, October 25, 2005, Blogger Vaga Bond said...

hey !! sud i take ny credit for inspiring u to become a versifier :D. nyways yeh last main twist kahan se aa gaya...ek se do kaise ho gaye ??

 
At 8:19 PM, October 25, 2005, Blogger ashona111 said...

yeah bond ... u should take the credit ... anyways ... i think i am not able to express what i meant ..... in the 5th para ie.

Not you are life's trunk my better-half,
Cause I am just a sail, she is the gaff;
More than a life partner you mean to me,
You are not the honey & I am not the bee.....

i have deliberately said that ..."you" (ie. whom i love) are not my girlfriend ... and the relation between u and me is not of bf and gf. it is totally different from that and more imp. also.
Ofcourse "you" is a gal here ... but not all relation between guys and gals are like couples. ...
and i am also not that mad to praise my gf. ... :D

 
At 9:40 PM, May 18, 2006, Blogger Amrita Sabat said...

well written yaar. my fav lines wer-
'Wish I could say love you very much,
But dont know the way I love you as such;
Beautiful is the way as I see this,
Deepened through time its just an abyss....'

wow!
actually d whole poem has been driven by intense emotion. beautiful.

but it also brings 2 light anoder of ur secrets(though i don't think it was supposed 2 b one....els u wudn't hav written & then even explained it in ur comments!)- dat der is a deeper ethereal form of love wich u yet haven't got in ur life but still dream of it, & certainly don't attach dis form of love 2 ur gf. in bare terms, u see 'life-partner' and 'love' as separate. Which to me, doesn't seem a happening, which will ever bring true happiness to life.

will u b satisfied & live with only dis superficial happiness(u- d bee, and gf- d honey)??

 
At 6:31 AM, August 19, 2006, Anonymous Anonymous said...

bavra mann dekhne chala ek sapna....
wanted to post a comment but dont kno what to comment n whom to...!!!
so did the trick by not commenting in the comments page...
the 1st line is part of a pretty gud song that i m listening to now(not hearing haan!!!)..

it's gud to see things from a distance and applause when situation craves for..

 
At 2:27 AM, November 10, 2006, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Earth looks beautiful from space, and so does this poem when I viewed it from someone else's eyes

 

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